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--急--請問此句英文有文法上或用詞錯誤嗎((12點))

Sep 13th 2013, 06:17

略嫌冗長繞口, 建議改寫如下:

The first volunteer service was performed from May 29-30, 2010, and the
second one from April 28-29, 2012. The both activities accumulated a
total time of 50 hours.

說明:
1) 依日期看, 這是敘述過去的事件, 不可用現在式, 而要用過去式.
2) 避免同樣的詞語重複出現.
3) volunteer可當形容詞用, 不必用volunteering.

四天服務50小時, 平均每天長達12.5小時, 還真辛苦啊!

參考資料羅莉 : 靈活翻譯

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